Review Detail of MrCAL in I got kidnapped into the game and is forced to become the Governor
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Hey guys! The Author here. Was thinking to review or not but thinking it wouldn’t hurt I guess. I would appreciate any feedback, the tone, pacing, writing. All is appreciated. If you want to see a successful or unsuccessful policy implemented by the character as well, please do put it in the comments.
I got kidnapped into the game and is forced to become the Governor
MrCAL
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Hello! Romance but it will be very rare. Writing mostly about the failures of Nationbuilding and governments in general.
Romance_guy:Romance?
MrCAL:Hello! Romance but it will be very rare. Writing mostly about the failures of Nationbuilding and governments in general.
If I were to write something in those universe. It would be the equivalent of the Andor series. Andor also inspired me to write from the Government’s perspective instead of the rebels.
Romance_guy:Is it possible to make the story something like Star Wars and mech touch ?
Maybe in the future. If I’m more competent in writing and understand the structure of the bureaucratic government. Following the paper trail and just got lost. Non stop work for the bureaucrats but the generals public don’t see any changes. But a typo error will cost someone their livelihood and to say sorry. A cheque payment.
Romance_guy:Is it possible to make the story something like Star Wars and mech touch ?
Very true. Trying to find a good one but some are too cartoony for what I want to do. A start up government fails along the way due to incompetent and corrupt leadership
KalamitiCker:The Synopsis is good and alright but the cover needs to be changed.
The picture you see right now is from AI generated pic haha. Only one that doesn’t look cartoony and somewhat serious. As my novel being an anti isekai where nothing goes right. I have gone to discord. Now just have to wait 24 hours
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