Review Detail of InternetSaint in Avatar : Tanya

This is the problem with fanfics that follow the main story line. The OC becomes the 3rd wheel and instead of adding to the story, they make everything cringe and nonsensical. Clearly the Avatar dying or losing would just end the story right then and there, which is why the author has to prevent that by turning Tanya into an imbecile. It would have been better if this story's focus was about Tanya doing her own thing instead of making her a parasite to the original story. Making the Avatar chaise the focus of the story is the biggest mistake one can make in an Avatar fanfic.