Review Detail of D3SP3R4D0 in becoming Dipper in Gravity falls isn’t So bad ,is it??(rewriting)

look I'm a sucker for anything gravity falls, so imagine my surprise and absolute glee that there's one with actually good grammar and what looks like the start of a great plot, the only thing I'm nitpicking is the interactions, I just feel like it's a little bit robotic/stiff?/formal but that's just me though and I know author-san will get better at this in the future, so please I beg of you author-san, please don't drop this, all the other gravity falls fic got dropped not even like 50 chapters in soplsplsplsplsplsps