quite an interesting book you have here, I like the aspect of conquering the whole world. another good thing to point out would be the SYSTEM---- it's different from the usual you see nowadays.......it doesn't spoon feed our main character everything ....that i quite like....i am very excited to see how will the story unfold. here is a suggestion i would like to give------plz don't make our character a one man army....he is trying to conquer a world....and no one can conquer a whole world by themselves...he should build an army of SPIRITS BEASTS as well as his COMPANIONS as well......i would love to see a proper kingdom building in making here.
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