The grammar is decent, which is the downside of most fanfics on this app. What I did notice in this story was the lack of character interactions, and when they did interact it came out forced, it even made me cringe sometimes. The concept is good, the story is pretty fast pace as of chapter 16(where I left off). Hopefully it is improved, I’ll probably come back again after trying out other fanfics on my list. Overall not a bad read if you have aren’t prone to second hand embarrassment like me from all the edgy and cringy moments.
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GOSTARemir_adar:its my first ff so i dont have experience in writting so am trying my best