I always read the first 5 chapters to write a review. Now, my thoughts are that I see some flaws. For example, why is he an airbending master? Why does nobody care that he's an airbending master? Seriously, an airbending master appears and nobody wonders where he came from? All he does is say 'come, I'll train you' without any questions. Also, it seems like the story is following the script of the entire series step by step for now. Well, that could change; I only read the first 5. The main character is just a spectator; he doesn't change the events. Hmm, I don't know what good thing to say.
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GOSTARRaptor2244:He’s also living on the street for some reason. Despite being one of the only airbenders in the world hes somehow homeless and penniless. Hes also a huge wuss. Finally he definitely isn’t a villain. Unless you count killing evil people and stealing food as being villainous which I don’t.