Review Detail of MrDaemonaux in I'm in Middle Earth: Going to Kill a Dragon at the Beginning
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I liked the story and managed to read it until chapter 139, but at that point the story becomes nearly completely unreadable. Character names make no sense whatsoever, weapons in some cases are messed up, spears become guns, swords are knives etc, location names, races.
I'm in Middle Earth: Going to Kill a Dragon at the Beginning
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MrDaemonauxLv14MrDaemonaux
Although the names were messed up since the 1st chapter, at least there was a chance that 1 out of 4 paragraphs could have the correct name. Now its so incomprehensible that even the messed up character names keep switching around and changing between multiple different names, like 1 character can have 5 different names that get thrown around.