Review Detail of Garland in MHA Code: Unknown

Overall while it was intersting to see how Izayoi works in the world of MHA, the pacing of the story really just felt too fast. You mentioned not wanting to write over the top descriptive stories but your story suffers from pacing issues and just how it really doesn't work well combined with the short chapters. Its all about balancing and really it just felt weak as its just Izayoi slapped into MHA without much thought. He doesn't interact with his classmates, we don't really see him much outside of what happens in canon and he is just a tag along who really doesn't bring much to the world. Its just following basic canon.