everything was excellent until you decided to give names of ayano and ichinose it left bad taste in my mouth not to mention son of devine being and goddess is just avarage looking
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GOSTARI don't know what bothers you about names, but everyone thinks what they want. Due to the external appearance of the protagonist, I didn't want to do the usual all-beautiful-is-perfect MC, if you have charming-looking parents, this doesn't mean that you will also look good. But thank you for your review. :)
he should be all perfect cuz he has his parents DNA in him well if he is the son of devine being and goddess then it's impossible for him to look average he should have devine appearance as for names those who read or watch classroom of the elite will not look it with good point of view in their minds as they will just remember appearance of anime characters
two extremely attractive people making a baby almost always guarantees an attractive child. even if you didn't want to make the mc extremely handsome. you could have at least made him handsome or more than above average. with the parents he has, average is just lame.
Sanguinius_6036:I don't know what bothers you about names, but everyone thinks what they want. Due to the external appearance of the protagonist, I didn't want to do the usual all-beautiful-is-perfect MC, if you have charming-looking parents, this doesn't mean that you will also look good. But thank you for your review. :)