Review Detail of Delvogen in Weasley is our King (SI)

Amazing start! I’m thrilled to see where this story goes. Your idea is one of the most original I’ve seen in a while, and Ron’s humor is a delightful addition. Overall, it’s incredibly enjoyable. Having read hundreds, if not over a thousand, of Harry Potter fanfics, I can confidently say this is one of the best beginnings I’ve come across. I’m eager to see what else you have in store.