Review Detail of GodOfLight in The Power of Ice

Writing quality : Normal, there are mistakes in grammar, but not often. Chapter updates : Good, 1-2 chapters a day. Story Development : There are too many time skips in the story itself, but mc's powers don't develop, of course a couple things like haki and martial arts have been added, but nothing has changed significantly in these 10 years, he was a weakling and still is. Character Design : Although he is an adult mentally, but behaves like a child, as if with a brain disease and reduced intelligence, too dumb in simple words, also did not like the way he says things like : I will protect your smile, no matter what it costs me, ( did you even read what you wrote ? ). World background : The usual One Piece, but changed a bit and not for the better.