Review Detail of 1King_Rep1 in Unlimited Sword Domain

Item: Unlimited Sword Domain
Rating: 2

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Needs more background. No idea on the aliens or psychic power. Feels like the author forgot what they were talking about. Then the author started adding their comments about how they need to speed up. They constantly spoil their own work by saying what is happening next. It feels like half their novel got shuffled out of order of events. For free reading ok, but it got too painful to read at chp30

Unlimited Sword Domain

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WeiNuanAutorWeiNuan

Thanks for your comment, will be more careful and done the correction to let other reader to read more comfortable.[img=recommend] But the background for now is not huge. At the later chapter can have a look[img=update]