Review Detail of ZeilTheTurtle in MHA: Sovereign of shadows

If you think so, then write which chapters and where they come from. I'll rewrite them

In the your prologue his heart stops and he died in the hospital, but then in first chapter he says that he was calmly walking around city when someone offered a chance to him and he ended up in the darkness. I have just checked last chapter, which was conversation of heroes and it is copied straight from russian fanfic.