Review Detail of Ritesh_Jha_1696 in marvel:Self-Evolution Into superman

bro I read like 10-15 chapters and story and character development are going pretty good it made me hooked to the story l the only fault I could find in this story is grammatical mistakes which is holding this story back but it cand be improved and if you fix some errors here and there it will make the story mor entertaining without having correcting mistakes ourselves when reading. Good work and thank you for translation 😊 👍🏻