It's interesting but I think you should plan it longer considering that you could just summarize her early childhood and training arc, then focus more to the plot.
AprilsMay
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GOSTARI apologize in advance if I've come off as rude but wouldn't it be better if you do it along the way, unless the early chapters were a build-up for a plot where the mc completely get out of her mother's control.
AprilsMay:Yeah, I wanted to add a bit of detail to her background, and to develop the kind of person she is. Before moving on to the plot.
Lazy_Fox111:I apologize in advance if I've come off as rude but wouldn't it be better if you do it along the way, unless the early chapters were a build-up for a plot where the mc completely get out of her mother's control.