Review Detail of Lazy_Fox111 in Overlord: Conquest of Despair

Item: Overlord: Conquest of Despair
Rating: 4

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Lazy_Fox111Lv45mthLazy_Fox111

It's interesting but I think you should plan it longer considering that you could just summarize her early childhood and training arc, then focus more to the plot.

Overlord: Conquest of Despair

AprilsMay

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AprilsMayAutorAprilsMay

Yeah, I wanted to add a bit of detail to her background, and to develop the kind of person she is. Before moving on to the plot.

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Lazy_Fox111Lv4Lazy_Fox111

I apologize in advance if I've come off as rude but wouldn't it be better if you do it along the way, unless the early chapters were a build-up for a plot where the mc completely get out of her mother's control.

AprilsMay:Yeah, I wanted to add a bit of detail to her background, and to develop the kind of person she is. Before moving on to the plot.

5mth

AprilsMayAutorAprilsMay

Nah, it's fine, I appreciate criticism and different ideas.

Lazy_Fox111:I apologize in advance if I've come off as rude but wouldn't it be better if you do it along the way, unless the early chapters were a build-up for a plot where the mc completely get out of her mother's control.

5mth