Review Detail of Arcane_12 in Echoes of Destiny: A Douluo Dalu Tale

Hello Readers, Author here ! I love duoluo dalu and have long wanted to write a fanfiction related to it. But as English is not my first language and i have only recently started reading fanfictions therefore i don't have much experience in writing. If anybody has any reviews, whether positive or negative please share. This fanfic is no harem with a single Love interest. I am also not very skilled in writing action scenes and therefore if you find them lacking, please bear with it. If you have any questions, please ask in the comments section. Thankyou