Review Detail of The_Dark_Hydrax in Against the Goddess, Kayla's counterattack

I really appreciate this!!! Although tell me, what did you think of my work, do you have anything you don't like, such as points of view or scenes that are not explained well? If you have any constructive criticism, don't hesitate to say it, it will help me a lot to improve! (I love you reader who left me my first review)