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The book misleads you. I thought this was a male character for novel but it started out with female lead. I just can't take my time to read until MC get his male Bodie back so I will drop this or skip intill MC gets his male Bodie back. Plot is ok though. Character development okish though could use more work. Spaceship battles aren't good you write it like a sea battle some of the time. Though way better than most who write spaceship battles.
What Do You Mean I'm The Captain Of A Yandere Mercenary Company?
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Look up " The Lost Fleet" by Jack Campbell. That's how I like my space battles be like, feels realistic too.There are others that I can recommend if you want.
Draekai:I'd like to know if you have a better example of how to write space battles. Not being mean here but genuinely curious because I want to learn from what you think is good. I admit I'm not that good at it at the moment.
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Muhd_Danial_9748:also that your problem there other work you can search for Male not here ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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Muhd_Danial_9748:my guy how does space battle work?, if it not a sea battle do they ram each other ?
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NowGoWithTheFlow:Look up " The Lost Fleet" by Jack Campbell. That's how I like my space battles be like, feels realistic too.There are others that I can recommend if you want.
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NowGoWithTheFlow:For example read The Lost Fleet. A very good book, that tells you how a space battle is.