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Review Detail of JustAnotherFan217 in Back to the Falcon: A Star Wars Second Chance

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JustAnotherFan217
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Low overall quality that doesn’t make sense in context of the overall universe. Not only does Han Solo awaken with Force abilities, but he can apparently perform Grandmaster level feats without any training whatsoever. Stopping blaster bolts and hiding their presence from Darth Vader are just two examples of what he does without having even one lesson in Force use. Add in the fact that the main character is constantly giving his ass-backwards philosophies in big monologues that, and there is very little here to actually enjoy. This had some real potential, but it was squandered entirely by giving Han force abilities.

Back to the Falcon: A Star Wars Second Chance

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I appreciate the criticism.

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Yes. Like - no problem with the fact that - MC in Han body can use Force. We all know "It's an energy field created by ALL living things. It surrounds us and penetrates us; it binds the galaxy together." And we know from Timothy Zahn books - evereyone can learn how use Force. We know - a droids who use Force, a rocks who use force, a force trees, a inorganic races. There are countless books, in which - the main thing is, how to feel Force for the first time, and after that you can learn on your own experiments or from rumors. Bain, Tash and Zak, BoShek, DS-1 crew, leader from Mace home planet and others train in same style. And in canon it was kind of implied that - Han was Force sensitive. Han is - the rightful heir to the throne of the Corelian Empire. And in past, the Emperor of Corelia, by force, ended the 14,000 year Alsakan Wars... By entering into Senate of the Republic and forcing them to stop fighting, with a sword at their throats... That is why the Corellian Jedi exist on Corellia. "No Such Thing As Luck" how Han manages to fly between black holes; vs Imperial pilots; a episode when he trains shooting against a duelist and does the same thing like Darth Bane; when he hides himself from Vader in the office of Captain of ISD. And e.t.c. And of cource - Atton Rand was eventually based on Han. So yes, if a person was put from default body to body of SW human who was conected with a Force. So he must sense new feeling(what he had never feel before). And easily be able to learn Force. BUT, anyway, he MUST spend MANY time on trainings, and not use high grade abilities without nothing. Moreover, why did he need to show use of the Force to the Imperials, and put a mark on himself for the Empire... A phrase <That's Not How the Force Works> suits for this story on 100%. Because - author does not know the lore of the Star Wars... There is such a character - Greedo. When Han arrives on Tatooine, he owes a debt to Jabba. And Greedo comes to demand a debt from Han, as a result - Greedo dies. But here - the author didnt even mention it, because the author doesnt know SW lore. A person who is well know SW lore - would preventively eliminate Greedo, more you can sell his body to bartender, coz as we know from lore - barmen spot special feromones in Greedo body. And after Han shoot - barmen craft special Liqueur from Greedo corpse to Jabba. MC can force bartender - then he sent Liqueur to Jabba, make mention - its a present from Han Solo. To decrease Jabba agression in future, and not become canonical Solo, who decide just ignore Jabba like dumb.