Review Detail of Kitsune_Kurama in Elemental Vampire
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Cool story so far, I like that you can create skills and such. Will Seina ever leave his body in the future, and maybe a romance develops? Idk what future skills you had planned, but I felt it would be injustice to not make suggestions with so much potential in this story and the mc powers. I hope you develop the mc CQC or close quarters combat and combined into a unique style with his shortsword and elements. like take inspiration from Fishman karate for the water skills and avatar would be sick, or as his control over elements gets better he can change the properties of them like for water he can control and flow and pressure his water produces. Imagine a pressurized punch with 15k lb psi to someone face when his masters water or adding pressurized water to his shortsword plus earth and wind control to create a pressurized water jet cutter cutting through anything like butter just some of the ideas I had that are slept on
Elemental Vampire
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Lintiun8:Nooo, i really thought it would be her or her and Joey, this information made me sad
maybe consider having him make a harden earth active/passive skill so he can make all his earth skills as hard as diamond or even harder by changing is structural makeup. consider adding skill mastery ranks - for example as your mastery increases, the cost will decrease, and power will increase and more you can do with it, as the skill increases in mastery it will evolve into better version constantly
Kitsune_Kurama:maybe consider having him make a harden earth active/passive skill so he can make all his earth skills as hard as diamond or even harder by changing is structural makeup. consider adding skill mastery ranks - for example as your mastery increases, the cost will decrease, and power will increase and more you can do with it, as the skill increases in mastery it will evolve into better version constantly
The thing is that he has always had anger issues. It's just a character he was born with and he's trying his best to control it. But there's certainly something cool that'll happen.😃
Kitsune_Kurama:can you explain why he has anger issues, cause it's a weird personality quirk to have without a cause? Is he going to develop a the sin of wrath skill or something or is this just how he is, cause if that is the case, if the anger issue is going, to make him a loner
anime_otaku_6087:First of all, thanks alot for the review. I really appreciate. Then about Siena, yes, she will leave his body when the time comes and there will also be romance but Siena won't be the love interest.I hope you continue enjoying the story.