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jojojo66
jojojo66Lv36mthjojojo66

you don't describe the match. There is no suspense in the match. Characters are bland.Its seems like I am reading something written by A.I. And for the match description, try to read some football related novel.Learn how they describe it. And for a football novel it quite fast paced.

Football/Soccer: I am the best

burakku

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burakku
burakkuAutorburakku

Thanks for the review. I will try to describe the matches better.