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Silbelphegor
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As of chapter one the fic is looking great. It has a nice pace and there's no useless exposition. It looks like the author knows how to apply the "show, don't tell" rule. Also, the grammar is looking good, not at all like the majority of fics on this site.Overall, it has great potential. Only thing left to see is the update speed. I'd love to see a daily update, but considering the lenght of the prologue that seems unreasonable. I'll just hope this doesn't get dropped in two chapters.

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Liked it!

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