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hde
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There's 3 problems for me personally 1 is that the mc just accepts getting reincarneted way to fast at that point just skip the reincarnation part. 2 is that except for his outfit it has nothing to do with bloodorne. and 3rd The dad already has connections with the mad king calling him a good dude wich gives me the ick tbh. Like the idea of someone with bloodborne powers reincarnating into gt sounds really good but this just isn't that.

A Hunter In GOT

MrEuripedes

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hde
hdeLv1hde

Do what you feel is best it's your story after all.

MrEuripedes:Yeahs, its understandable. But I just skipped that as I didn't know what to write and some people would react differently. Some shocked others uncaring. I think the mc would be the uncaring type. however I am unsure. Maybe I'll rewrite the previous chapters once I get better
MrEuripedes
MrEuripedesAutorMrEuripedes

The reincarnation part I skipped what was useless such as the ROB section so I am unsure of what else you want me to skip. He will indeed have some abilities of the hunters. And the mad king one is understandable.

Gabichu_Yeah
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The first 2 complaints are irrelevant, the third is annoying considering the morals of our world.

hde
hdeLv1hde

I wouldve preferred if the mc like actually had a reaction to getting reincarnated but that's just personal preference.

MrEuripedes:The reincarnation part I skipped what was useless such as the ROB section so I am unsure of what else you want me to skip. He will indeed have some abilities of the hunters. And the mad king one is understandable.
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MrEuripedes
MrEuripedesAutorMrEuripedes

Yeahs, its understandable. But I just skipped that as I didn't know what to write and some people would react differently. Some shocked others uncaring. I think the mc would be the uncaring type. however I am unsure. Maybe I'll rewrite the previous chapters once I get better

hde:I wouldve preferred if the mc like actually had a reaction to getting reincarnated but that's just personal preference.
MrEuripedes
MrEuripedesAutorMrEuripedes

Thanks, I'll try to improve over time

hde:Do what you feel is best it's your story after all.