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DaoistyLklAZ
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I do not know what the author smoked, but give it to me too. in general, the story is so-so for a number of reasons, gg is stupid and does not think about the consequences of his own and subordinates, he does not know how to manage staff, earn money for the sake of earning money, but only through a chest, but he can acquire things through the system and sell them, even if the price is too high and what? the characters also revolve around gg as NPCs dummies without a sense of mind, stupid in general.The system is also too weak for sealing spiritual power outside the store, although the author says that only forces operate in the store itself. I would put 3.5 for the story and then only with a stretch. and yes, gg does not know how to get women. the interaction of the characters is also low, a few words here, there are no thoughts of girls, etc.

I open a black store in Douluo Dalu

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Arius_Nayrb
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1. The items he buys from the system cannot be sold, they can only be used by him or his subordinates. 2. It is obvious that the story is going to revolve around the mc, and if you don't like the way the characters are written I respect your opinion. 3. If you have read stories about, Shops, auctions etc, you will understand that the system is only onnipotent inside the store or the auction building, the system is weak because our mc is just a beginner trader. 4. The story revolves around the store, yes there are spisodes with the Douluo girls but that will be much later. 5. Thanks for the review and your thoughts 😄.

DaoistyLklAZ
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I could have given a description of his system earlier, otherwise it was not clear at all. Thank you