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Review Detail of Sir_Squirrel in The Witcher: The cruel thief

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Sir_Squirrel
Sir_SquirrelLv48mthSir_Squirrel

tbh the premis of the story is kinda cool and the power set he got at the start was really fitting for the witcher world, and when i first saw this i was really happy to have finally found a good witcher fic but this type of writing is just not my thing, for example, the character reactions are so exaggerated and waaay more intense then they should be, and the writing is filled to the brim with métaphores and overdrawn descriptions that it just started to seem repetitive and made reading the actual paragraphs far less enjoyable, and made it a chore instead to the point that i started skimming most of it, and am not saying the writing itself is bad per se, i mean it's actually great compared to what you would usually run into on webnovel, especially considering i didn't run into any grammatical errors and if i did they were probably so insignificant that i didn't notice them, but i just feel the general theme and writing style are just unnecessarelly heavy and drawn out, that said, this is still a good story that i think many people would like, all i said is just my personal opinion.

The Witcher: The cruel thief

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David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4David_Drake

+1

1emanresU
1emanresULv11emanresU

Agreed, I couldn't even get through chapter 1.