Review Detail of Mamdouh_mohamed in Naruto : Trickery

Sorry, but I can't continue. The writing and narration method is good, and the length of the chapter is also appropriate, and the secondary characters also feel alive in them. They are not just side characters, but they have their depth and meaning just like the mc. The only thing that I do not like and that makes me leave it is that Naruto, despite his suffering for me 12 years of injustice and insults from the village. He did not leave it and leave just because after he became a genin and with the help of the Hokage and Kakashi who silenced the villagers, he no longer had a problem staying. In the canon, Naruto was influenced by Asura chakra, so he was very naive and had no problem. To stay, but here he is smart and not affected by Asura chakra, so it is not reasonable for him to stay in the village after being subjected to injustice for 12 years since his birth just because after he finally gained strength, the villagers could no longer harm him and the Hokage prevented them from disturbing him, but To give the author his due, this is my fair assessment of the novel in my opinion Writing quality 5/5 Update stability 5/5 Story development 2/5 because of what I talked about above Character design 5/5 World wallpaper 5/5