Review Detail of SuperVast in Five Echoes

This novel makes the viewers ask questions, and this is a good thing! You want your viewer hooked and your doing exactly that! Good job! Though one more thing. There's a line that says, "Her sense of humor is sharp and often veers towards the dark side." It kind of irked me. I kind of want you to show more and tell less, maybe add an example to further the point? Nevertheless, good job. I'm proud of you son.