There are only a few available now but the plotline that was laid out in the first four chapters has the potential to expand into many interesting stories. Also, the narration is very easy to follow with new little to non grammar problems. The Main character ability is still quite unclear for me but I'm still curious about his actual potential. Overall, your up into a good start. Keep working on your book Author.
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