Review Detail of Granville4554 in Naruto: Shinobi SI

writing is pretty good. there's some mistakes here and there but it's not enough to give you an aneurysm lol. the story is going in a nice development and it fits in really well with the World design and I like the way the author has designed their own version of the pre-canon plot. but I'll be honest, for the character development I am slightly disappointed in how the mc was basically forced to join Root. don't get me wrong I totally understand the why since even though he was a prodigy and starting to gain momentum in power (political, financial, and actual strength) as well as he was being supported by the Hiruzen and his eldest son as much as they could given their positions, but at the end of the day mc was on his own with no clan to back him up so when Danzo came calling he had no choice but to answer. I was just sad to see him forced to grow up from that naive little dreamer into a killer of the Ninja World like how he was trying not to be. but at least he's still fighting back in his own little rebellious ways so that's good. finally updating speed. I just got caught up so I can't determine that but so far it seems to be more than once a week so that's good for me lol