Hey! i really like this story, i just want to offer some constructive criticism! One thing is that I noticed quite a few run on sentences and spelling mistakes! Other than that I think the story is good! I would love to see more of it<3 Also- this may be a little self promotion but i have a fanifc about the MCU that I've been working on for a while! i finally released 2 chapters and I absolutely LOVE any feedback <3
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