Review Detail of Orsted_sama in Uninvited, A Vampire Becomes Part of My Youth

I'd give it an 10 out of 10 for creativity and storytelling. The story absolutely grabs your attention, and the way the characters engage is quite cool. They maintain matters thrilling with some humor and clever conversations. Now, in relation to grammar and stuff, I'd say it is like a 8 out of 10. Most of the time, it's all true, but there are some little punctuation and grammar hiccups right here and there. Also, some of the ones lengthy sentences may want to use a trim to lead them to less difficult to read. As for the characters, I'd deliver it an 10 out of 10. They each have their personal specific personalities and quirks, which makes them fun to follow. The story flows k, like a 9 out of 10, but there are moments while it could move smoother, specially when they switch among scenes.