You should try to make your writing style more interesting and neat it a bit more. Don't just copy paste it because the format surely will screw your write. I just read it a bit to get the gist of it. It's just been 2 chapters, so I need more chapters to rate it.
rainedrain
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GOSTARrainedrain:sorry man but i can only cop and paste some chapter because I'm using a phone