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Review Detail of monke6 in Sakumo Haruno, The Badass Ninja ReLife

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monke6
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normally i always stop reading a fanfic when the mc tells people he reincarnated especially as a child, but youve handled it the best ive seen on webnovel and your writing quality is amazing aswell, and making his parents a support for him makes the story better becasue so many fan fics make their mcs despise their new parents or even kill them becasue they see them as annoyances. Honestly the biggest problem so far is the mc he seems too scared but this can be changed seeing as the fan fic just started and he will have character development. My only request would be that you instead of making him follow sakuras path you make him do his own things such as branching out his medical interest to research to make himself stronger but not making him go the orochimaru path becasue he should be stronger than sakura seeing as he would have more chakra and he knows the story.

Sakumo Haruno, The Badass Ninja ReLife

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To be honest right now I am thinking he would be wielding a poisoned spiked bat or spear similar to Whitebeard's. His medical knowledge will be better than Sakura's because he started far earlier, his brain is far greater than hers due to being forced to handle his adult memories, and the overwhelming Yin Chakra making him into a more mentally focused person.