Read what was free for a reference point: The grammar is ok but can use some editing to clarify some things about the system and skills. The stories plot is intertaining but fights are a little lack luster. The story has its a wn unique take on a genre that is used a lot on here. MC doesn’t really face hardships or experience personal growth but he is a zombie. The system I don’t understand how the functions work because it says one thing but MC uses it to do more then what is stated like his inventory must be huge with all those monster parts guns ammo clothes and whatever else he has
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GOSTARWhen it hits 50 chapters I will but looks like you bounce from one idea to the next and don’t stick with it pick one story and complete it no matter if it is a hit or not just be passionate about your story
GilgameshTheFirst:try reading my book ,m sure you will love it , Apocalypse : Rise Of The Undead
Pragmatico:When it hits 50 chapters I will but looks like you bounce from one idea to the next and don’t stick with it pick one story and complete it no matter if it is a hit or not just be passionate about your story