Review Detail of Erdetector in I'll Be The Hero That I Want To Be
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No one can resist a large harem, but it seems you've made a critical mistake by keeping girls away from the main character. My apologies, dear author, but I'm afraid I can't assist any further. Perhaps your novel has potential in terms of its plot, but I strongly suggest removing the harem tag. The main character's actions give off the impression of a weakling, rendering his intelligence meaningless. This novel, quite frankly, feels unpleasant due to your lack of attention. I understand your desire to create a slightly suspenseful and mysterious story, but sometimes simplicity is best. It appears that you struggle with crafting a successful harem, author. I highly doubt you'll avoid turning the main character into a weakling. In a way, he's already displaying signs of C_c_U__c_K. A pathetic dishwasher, indeed. I just have one thing to say: you're simply not skilled at creating a captivating harem. Farewell.
I'll Be The Hero That I Want To Be
FalseFace
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The_Red_Snow:Brother, I came here because of R 18 tags and harem tag. Like me, there are many readers who want to read harem novels. So, you better don't remove the harem tag. You're going to lose some readers. It's not even 50 chapters yet, so you have time to make things better. Your writing seems good and you can certainly do it. Stick with what you want to do with your story. While sometimes thinking about other people's suggestions isn't that bad, but still don't change what you envisioned because it may make things worse for you. Follow your heart and make it even better.
Thank you for your honest review. ..You are right at the few things you've pointed out, this is my first time writing a harem novel. Since this is my first time, that means I'm just a novice. Though, I'm currently working on improving the plot by reading other harem novels as inspiration....I've already thought deeply about my plans for the plot. Unfortunately, I don't want this to become like my other novel where I ended up changing some of it's plot because of the readers, not sticking to the original plan. But I guess, I'll try adding some simplicity like what you've mentioned....I've already repeated this sentence, but I don't want to make the heroines nor the mc TOO dependent on each other. They need to be strong enough to defend themselves...Though, maybe you are right about removing the harem tag. I don't want to make other readers expectations to plummet if I did make some sort of mistake... Though the ending will remain a harem, but to clear some things, there won't be any NTR in this novel... There will be revenge for the OG Saber, but that will be in the future...Anyways, good luck finding the right novel that will keep you entertain in the future. But if possible, can you suggest other harem novels that I can read so that I can continue improving the story for the readers?
Brother, I came here because of R 18 tags and harem tag. Like me, there are many readers who want to read harem novels. So, you better don't remove the harem tag. You're going to lose some readers. It's not even 50 chapters yet, so you have time to make things better. Your writing seems good and you can certainly do it. Stick with what you want to do with your story. While sometimes thinking about other people's suggestions isn't that bad, but still don't change what you envisioned because it may make things worse for you. Follow your heart and make it even better.
FalseFace:Thank you for your honest review. ..You are right at the few things you've pointed out, this is my first time writing a harem novel. Since this is my first time, that means I'm just a novice. Though, I'm currently working on improving the plot by reading other harem novels as inspiration....I've already thought deeply about my plans for the plot. Unfortunately, I don't want this to become like my other novel where I ended up changing some of it's plot because of the readers, not sticking to the original plan. But I guess, I'll try adding some simplicity like what you've mentioned....I've already repeated this sentence, but I don't want to make the heroines nor the mc TOO dependent on each other. They need to be strong enough to defend themselves...Though, maybe you are right about removing the harem tag. I don't want to make other readers expectations to plummet if I did make some sort of mistake... Though the ending will remain a harem, but to clear some things, there won't be any NTR in this novel... There will be revenge for the OG Saber, but that will be in the future...Anyways, good luck finding the right novel that will keep you entertain in the future. But if possible, can you suggest other harem novels that I can read so that I can continue improving the story for the readers?
Don't worry, I haven't removed it. Rather, I placed it on the last part since like I said, it is still a harem.
The_Red_Snow:Brother, I came here because of R 18 tags and harem tag. Like me, there are many readers who want to read harem novels. So, you better don't remove the harem tag. You're going to lose some readers. It's not even 50 chapters yet, so you have time to make things better. Your writing seems good and you can certainly do it. Stick with what you want to do with your story. While sometimes thinking about other people's suggestions isn't that bad, but still don't change what you envisioned because it may make things worse for you. Follow your heart and make it even better.
that's very good, And most importantly, look at his profile: it says he has only read for 48 minutes. With so many other activities on his account, do you really think he has read your book? I think he just reviewed your book based on negative comments in the review section. Just ignore him or maybe even delete this review; it seems fake to me.
FalseFace:Don't worry, I haven't removed it. Rather, I placed it on the last part since like I said, it is still a harem.
Don't listen to that guy, author. Create your OWN story. There's no need for you to listen to a guy who haven't even read that far as of yet. To be honest, your other novel is already good. The only mistake you had is probably listening to these kind of people. Your story is PEAK!
FalseFace:Thank you for your honest review. ..You are right at the few things you've pointed out, this is my first time writing a harem novel. Since this is my first time, that means I'm just a novice. Though, I'm currently working on improving the plot by reading other harem novels as inspiration....I've already thought deeply about my plans for the plot. Unfortunately, I don't want this to become like my other novel where I ended up changing some of it's plot because of the readers, not sticking to the original plan. But I guess, I'll try adding some simplicity like what you've mentioned....I've already repeated this sentence, but I don't want to make the heroines nor the mc TOO dependent on each other. They need to be strong enough to defend themselves...Though, maybe you are right about removing the harem tag. I don't want to make other readers expectations to plummet if I did make some sort of mistake... Though the ending will remain a harem, but to clear some things, there won't be any NTR in this novel... There will be revenge for the OG Saber, but that will be in the future...Anyways, good luck finding the right novel that will keep you entertain in the future. But if possible, can you suggest other harem novels that I can read so that I can continue improving the story for the readers?
FalseFace:Don't worry, I haven't removed it. Rather, I placed it on the last part since like I said, it is still a harem.
I know that I'm idiot, but I'm less than an idiot that you think since I know myself that I'm already an idiot in the first place, 😂😂
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Hey, author, I've seen the reply you gave. That guy probably reported it after feeling embarrassed hahaha.
FalseFace:I know that I'm idiot, but I'm less than an idiot that you think since I know myself that I'm already an idiot in the first place, 😂😂
Kaimix09:Hey, author, I've seen the reply you gave. That guy probably reported it after feeling embarrassed hahaha.