Review Detail of drake2378 in DC: Son of Samael

the premise of the story itself is fine and the auther knows dc well enough that i don't think we will get glaring problems of not knowing what character can do what. the thing holding this back is its hard to understand. i get the general idea but its obvious the writter does not know how to write english very well. putting words in orders that are redundant. an example of the kind of the worst of it is ''he knows this cause he knows this'' where the sentence repeats itself and pronouns are often mixed op a he is referred to as a she than a he again in like 4 sentences. weirdly enough most everything is spelled correctly. i feel like if they could get a fan who knows english to help edit the story it would raise in quality to 4.5 or 5 stars