Review Detail of B4lth in Kyouhana: The Dark Lord's Bride Offering

The first chapter of this is dark, gritty and really well written. It made me think I was reading a hard boiled mystery book and really drew me in. Then the tone switched entirely and became a fun fantasy romance romp. I genuinely laughed out loud at a few places. There are a few grammar issues and in a few places I wasn't sure what was meant, but it was easily overlooked as the story is fun to read. The only thing that really bothered me was that it switches tenses and I really don't like tense switches, they break my immersion, but that's just me. Other than that, a great read. Good job!