The main character is annoying, the author constantly makes him make stupid decisions for the sake of having character development later on. That in itself ruins the character development, it is carried out in an unnatural fashion and comes across as very rushed. I liked the 18 scenes, their only downside being that they are overly verbose. The writing quality is decent. Overall, it was a good read until chapter 40. In chapter 40 the main character flirts and s3xually excites a woman to the brink and sends a guy over to her after leaving her frustrated, then gets a semi chub as he watches the guy kiss and take her home. Pathetic behavior and an ntr flag.
The_Lonely_Guy
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