Review Detail of Thalia_Ilace in Rise of the Peerless Magus

You did a really good job with this novel so far! The only thing really bringing down my rating is the stability updates which I can't really give a rating on since it's only 3 chapters. The writing quality is really great all though I do wish you wouldn't tell me what is being felt so much. You're doing REALLY well with descriptions so I don't think you need to add it in. I can already feel what you're trying to portray and that's really my only gripe with your writing. There were a few mistakes but mostly words that got cut off as you were writing. For example things like: ca (instead of can) or worl (instead of world) which I think is really minor and not necessarily any indication of your writing skill. I felt like it's going at a good pace so far and I was given a good amount of things to have been wondering, "What's going to happen here?" "How is this going to pan out?" but also "Wow a lot is happening in this chapter!" Your character descriptions were wonderful and your descriptions of the world around your characters was also really well done. So good job author! Keep it up!