There are a lot of diverse elements to this story. The author has picked a large challenge bringing together diverse characters from different genres of fiction, but clearly has a strong idea of how they should relate to each other. There are some minor issues with dialogue clarity and differentiating speakers, but this is easily resolved by editing and does not distract from the narrative. Keep up the good work, author!
YamiV
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