If you are looking for action, then you have reached the right novel. I am intrigued by how willful the main character is. I wish I was like him. 😂 Apart from that the story is a good one, definitely a must read. I believe your story will be successful. Well done. Maybe you can polish the story a little bit, repeat his name less and use other pronouns for him or descriptions
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