Review Detail of Occasional_Bookie in God's beloved daughter

I've read all the way up to chapter 6 as of this writing. I gotta say, the story is engrossing as of chapter 6. There is healthy character development, consistent updates, and as a character driven story, it is doing a good job at providing insights, motivations, faults and peaks to the primary characters. The supporting characters feel like they serve sufficient purpose in showing the faults and virtues of the characters, and help reinforce and introduce motivation. All in all, very well done. I'm planning on continuing to follow this story. Also, score is actually 4.6, not a flat 4 like the stars show, Don't be misled.