It was an interesting read, but it lacks tension, it is too relaxed, and it feels like nothing aside from him pickin things has happened. The story is either too slow, or the chapters too short. This would be alright in a different kind of story, one that was a slice of life adventure maybe. The synopsis promises a man that wants to become the strongest, yet he feels like a guy too relaxed to want that, it feels like he just wants to have a peaceful life. The entire world, despite how much it changed, seems too peaceful, there's no conflicts, no battles, nothing that stories about main characters wanting to become the strongests promises. It is, to be honest, quite dull. It feels like the world is just sitting and waiting for him to get done picking random things and powers from everywhere before any plot actually begins...
Lazy_Pen_Master
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GOSTARLazy_Pen_Master:thanks for your thoughts. this is also came to my attention but I assure you that exciting combat, action and character interaction are waiting for you.
Kaiser_6117:noice single FL superiority! could be better if the FL is redhead but that's just me....