Review Detail of jayden_mcfadden in I am the 'Supreme' Spider-Man

The book idea is pretty good, I like the use of a sign in system, but the rewawards are random so sometimes he gets something busted sometimes he doesn’t. The background is pretty good and so is the character development. My only issue is grammar, sometimes find it unbearable with how bad the grammar can be, but the story makes up for it in other areas