Review Detail of Unsoph in No Medicine For Regret

I am legitimately confused by this novel, the first chapter is just too much. The synopsis is extremely alluring and worthwhile but the first chapter is just that much downer. There is almost close to no problem in grammar but the same can't be said for the formation of sentences and them making sense. I like the way world-building is done here and all because it is captivating, but, and big but here, it is harder to understand the more someone progresses taking away immersion. The chapters in need of a thorough redesigning.