The writing is all over the place. Most of it is just so confusing. Can’t tell weather this is past or present tense. Descriptions were odd and narrator sounded schizophrenic. Im gonna keep reading it because i see potential. This isn’t Terrible and the synopsis is good. My interest is there.
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