Cute and adorable to see an impossible obsessive romance come true. The only pity I see is his tendency to involve Gods and wars between transendental beings in his two stories. I feel that things escalate too much and lose focus on the obsessive romance, I would like it to hear more simplicity and be more common, normal, I think that way the romance would be valued more, but this is the only negative aspect I find and it is one more personal preference. You write very well and if possible write more. "Thank you for being born and bringing this into the world."
DeeplyLostInShadow
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GOSTARI don't really want to involve it in the Oshi no Ko story though, don't worry. It was actually just to mention that both worlds have the ""same"" enemy, which is a nice way to link them. Ofc, as Ren is a mortal and will stay like that, he won't really be interacting with pretty much anything beyond that for the supernatural world. Thanks for your review! I'm trying my best to deliver more :)
DeeplyLostInShadow:I don't really want to involve it in the Oshi no Ko story though, don't worry. It was actually just to mention that both worlds have the ""same"" enemy, which is a nice way to link them. Ofc, as Ren is a mortal and will stay like that, he won't really be interacting with pretty much anything beyond that for the supernatural world. Thanks for your review! I'm trying my best to deliver more :)