i don't understand which pov it was. or even the world building in early chapter really confuse me. Cain and fred which i don't know what it's origin and how it's power work. and the timeline i can't get it because it's written so short . and does Subaru died then Fred back along with him or what? but well the character idea is interesting. shame the grammar make my brain cell hurt really bad. what kind power mc have? sigh... whatever I'm done with this. have a great time sir. this is my personal opinion about the fic.
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