i mean it was a good read until the mc's personality got established and it was s**t, like he made me drop the ff.
LordOrpheus
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GOSTARLordOrpheus:If you are against the MC growing as a person do not read this ‼️‼️‼️
It’s crazy because the very next chapter I am writing adresses this. I don’t mind the 1 star reviews now because the MC is a terrible guy. It’s just funny seeing the reactions to his unfinished character arc
SleepyMaker:mc never tries to actually get good at anything. for example in basketball he always reverses if he misses a shot. l
SleepyMaker:mc never tries to actually get good at anything. for example in basketball he always reverses if he misses a shot. l
LordOrpheus:If you are against the MC growing as a person do not read this ‼️‼️‼️
Injustice:The Mc does not have the right to be classified as a person
Minata told a little girl he can’t wait for her to grow up so he can see how much hotter she will become. The MC is terrible, but not a p*do
average_ff_enjoyr:he is minata level pervert
You had to make the mc a literal trash, just so that you could have a character development to make him a decent dude. It just shows how lacking your ability in creating a good MC. i mean I can't write a good story. But i sure do read a lot of them.
LordOrpheus:Minata told a little girl he can’t wait for her to grow up so he can see how much hotter she will become. The MC is terrible, but not a p*do
Incapable????? I’m doing this because I wanted to try something different. Go read Spider-Man: Absolute Godspeed and tell me I can’t write. I wish I didn’t have to make a new account so I wasn’t hit with these wild accusations 😭😭😭
Z_Ril:You had to make the mc a literal trash, just so that you could have a character development to make him a decent dude. It just shows how lacking your ability in creating a good MC. i mean I can't write a good story. But i sure do read a lot of them.
and then you got mad when people said that the mc is bad. I mean that's the whole meaning of a review section no?
LordOrpheus:Minata told a little girl he can’t wait for her to grow up so he can see how much hotter she will become. The MC is terrible, but not a p*do
Z_Ril:and then you got mad when people said that the mc is bad. I mean that's the whole meaning of a review section no?
How am I mad about reviews when I literally liked and pinned the bad reviews to the top? Are you slow? 😭😭
Z_Ril:and then you got mad when people said that the mc is bad. I mean that's the whole meaning of a review section no?
LordOrpheus:Minata told a little girl he can’t wait for her to grow up so he can see how much hotter she will become. The MC is terrible, but not a p*do