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Review Detail of average_ff_enjoyr in Reborn in Marvel as a Time Warping Mutant

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average_ff_enjoyr
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i mean it was a good read until the mc's personality got established and it was s**t, like he made me drop the ff.

Reborn in Marvel as a Time Warping Mutant

LordOrpheus

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SleepyMaker
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mc never tries to actually get good at anything. for example in basketball he always reverses if he misses a shot. l

LordOrpheus
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If you are against the MC growing as a person do not read this ‼️‼️‼️

Injustice
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The Mc does not have the right to be classified as a person

LordOrpheus:If you are against the MC growing as a person do not read this ‼️‼️‼️
LordOrpheus
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He doesn’t. As of now he’s awful

Injustice:The Mc does not have the right to be classified as a person
Sir_Squirrel
Sir_SquirrelLv4Sir_Squirrel

why? what happened?

Injustice:The Mc does not have the right to be classified as a person
LordOrpheus
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It’s crazy because the very next chapter I am writing adresses this. I don’t mind the 1 star reviews now because the MC is a terrible guy. It’s just funny seeing the reactions to his unfinished character arc

SleepyMaker:mc never tries to actually get good at anything. for example in basketball he always reverses if he misses a shot. l
mow
mowLv4mow

What happened?

Injustice:The Mc does not have the right to be classified as a person
KingKarma_1766
KingKarma_1766Lv4KingKarma_1766

I'll also do that tbh... I'll also abuse my power so what else is terrible??

SleepyMaker:mc never tries to actually get good at anything. for example in basketball he always reverses if he misses a shot. l
Aady_Shrestha
Aady_ShresthaLv4Aady_Shrestha

I’ll read lf there is no harem

LordOrpheus:If you are against the MC growing as a person do not read this ‼️‼️‼️
ThanatosGreekGod
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I’ll read if there Is or isn’t harem cause Fanfics can be good or bad with or without harem

Aady_Shrestha:I’ll read lf there is no harem
General_Mahoraga
General_MahoragaLv3General_Mahoraga

what happened?

General_Mahoraga
General_MahoragaLv3General_Mahoraga

why?

Injustice:The Mc does not have the right to be classified as a person
average_ff_enjoyr
average_ff_enjoyrLv3average_ff_enjoyr

he is minata level pervert

General_Mahoraga:what happened?
LordOrpheus
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Minata told a little girl he can’t wait for her to grow up so he can see how much hotter she will become. The MC is terrible, but not a p*do

average_ff_enjoyr:he is minata level pervert
Z_Ril
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You had to make the mc a literal trash, just so that you could have a character development to make him a decent dude. It just shows how lacking your ability in creating a good MC. i mean I can't write a good story. But i sure do read a lot of them.

LordOrpheus:Minata told a little girl he can’t wait for her to grow up so he can see how much hotter she will become. The MC is terrible, but not a p*do
LordOrpheus
LordOrpheusAutorLordOrpheus

Incapable????? I’m doing this because I wanted to try something different. Go read Spider-Man: Absolute Godspeed and tell me I can’t write. I wish I didn’t have to make a new account so I wasn’t hit with these wild accusations 😭😭😭

Z_Ril:You had to make the mc a literal trash, just so that you could have a character development to make him a decent dude. It just shows how lacking your ability in creating a good MC. i mean I can't write a good story. But i sure do read a lot of them.
Z_Ril
Z_RilLv13Z_Ril

and then you got mad when people said that the mc is bad. I mean that's the whole meaning of a review section no?

LordOrpheus:Minata told a little girl he can’t wait for her to grow up so he can see how much hotter she will become. The MC is terrible, but not a p*do
LordOrpheus
LordOrpheusAutorLordOrpheus

No I’m annoyed when people lie and say he likes children. I would never write something like that

Z_Ril:and then you got mad when people said that the mc is bad. I mean that's the whole meaning of a review section no?
LordOrpheus
LordOrpheusAutorLordOrpheus

How am I mad about reviews when I literally liked and pinned the bad reviews to the top? Are you slow? 😭😭

Z_Ril:and then you got mad when people said that the mc is bad. I mean that's the whole meaning of a review section no?
average_ff_enjoyr
average_ff_enjoyrLv3average_ff_enjoyr

he is a bit better then minata ... what an achievement

LordOrpheus:Minata told a little girl he can’t wait for her to grow up so he can see how much hotter she will become. The MC is terrible, but not a p*do